Monitor This Writer Closely

Dear Mukti, A follow up of the recent TJ news edited by you revealed a few issues. Kindly take care of such mistakes in your forthcoming edits. We need appropriate, right sized, sharp (not grainy) photos that have not been ‘photoshopped’. The photo that the writer had...

Wordiness and Hyphenation

Hi, Sumit. I haven’t gone through this copy, but on a cursory look, it needs a couple of corrections. http://www.scivista.com/content/20110411/gas-prices-near-all-time-high-price-7812612.html The content at the bottom is coming out all bold; something to do with...

Issues Abound in This Writer’s Copy

Hi, Mukti. This news needs another edit from you: http://www.scivista.com/content/20110503/rim-unveiled-thinnest-and-most-powerful-blackberry-bold-9900-9930-7812673.html There were three mistakes in the headline itself. Kindly edit the headline and inform the erring...

Check Your Writer’s Stale Style

Hi, Jatin. Divya’s writing style can be difficult on readers. You need to edit her copies closely for readability and style. Her style is very stale and is full of clichés that don’t even fit. Here’s just one sentence to clarify how we edit a copy for style:...

When in Doubt, Leave it Out

Hi Ayurdhi, Kindly only write what you have thoroughly checked to be true. Where did you read she is a supermodel? No source has mentioned this. Kindly explain how you could possibly confuse swimsuit model with a supermodel. Where did you read Elin and supermodel in...

Distortion of Facts by the Writer

Hi Prerna, I am not publishing your cancer/obesity news on TJ today. Among other reasons, the chief reason is how you have distorted news facts in the news. This is what the original source tells me: The statistic also showed that, of all cancers attributable to an...